tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post1768819540536188051..comments2023-08-28T03:14:50.812-04:00Comments on Bright Light - Dark Words: SunfallUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-80365270727667747142010-11-22T01:53:54.868-05:002010-11-22T01:53:54.868-05:00Thanks Lena. I'm glad you enjoy it. I'm ke...Thanks Lena. I'm glad you enjoy it. I'm keeping up with your blog too and loving it!Fyodor Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534037562366722042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-40211780690715617042010-11-21T22:14:10.288-05:002010-11-21T22:14:10.288-05:00possibly one of my favourites that you've writ...possibly one of my favourites that you've written. <br /><br />thanks for posting.Lenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03730894219937316710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-25836548701973271272010-11-12T23:55:00.858-05:002010-11-12T23:55:00.858-05:00Your poetry is amazing...with supporters such as y...Your poetry is amazing...with supporters such as you stand beside us, we can continue our efforts and make the potluck event more enjoyable for its large number of entries, multiple levels or types of talents, and authentic enjoyment of poetry and poetry reading...Come in any time when we are open, feel free to ask questions and read others.<br />Thank you in advance.<br />Have A Weekend A Graceful As Your Spirits.<br />xoxoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-83180475230262002312010-11-12T23:54:26.258-05:002010-11-12T23:54:26.258-05:00Thanks for sharing this one Fyodor!!
Vivid imagery...Thanks for sharing this one Fyodor!!<br />Vivid imagery and so many dimensions to flow through.. :)<br /><br />Love xxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-67035024884325679812010-11-10T16:04:43.103-05:002010-11-10T16:04:43.103-05:00Also it is significant that they are "looking...Also it is significant that they are "looking westward" waiting for the sun to rise... we all know the sun rises in the east. There's a lot going on in that stanza.Fyodor Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534037562366722042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-17411407644645280852010-11-10T16:03:22.214-05:002010-11-10T16:03:22.214-05:00Thanks Ray. The "looking westward" lines...Thanks Ray. The "looking westward" lines are not talking about the sun as a physical reality but as a metaphorical representation. I am playing on 'end times' here but it has very little to do with the sun's burning out - I'm using that as a trope.<br />I appreciate you comments though. :)Fyodor Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534037562366722042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-22860137982830852832010-11-10T14:23:54.817-05:002010-11-10T14:23:54.817-05:00I too liked the idea of "Sunfall" as of ...I too liked the idea of "Sunfall" as of course it must as all else in its seasons follow! <br />And I wouldn't worry too much about "So looking westward we still wait/ Not trusting he will rise again". On good authority we have at least four billion years to go before the sun's fate is sealed. :-)Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-80230089061727836062010-11-10T09:52:26.555-05:002010-11-10T09:52:26.555-05:00Yeah, I should definitely go again. Although, I...Yeah, I should definitely go again. Although, I've been to the ROM a couple times. I would really like to spend some more time in the AGO.Fyodor Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534037562366722042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-44232944392107929242010-11-10T09:46:36.113-05:002010-11-10T09:46:36.113-05:00Oh and as for underoath, I am really loving the ne...Oh and as for underoath, I am really loving the new music! Have you listened to it yet? It is heavier, but I am loving pretty much everything about it. Aaron will definitely be missed though. (Daniel Davidson does seem like quite a good fit though!)<br /><br />(ps. If you ever want to go to go to the museum, it's half price fridays after 4:30 and is free to students on tuesdays!)juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217921788622880428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-39786170885068803132010-11-10T09:43:26.750-05:002010-11-10T09:43:26.750-05:00This is a really great poem! I really like the end...This is a really great poem! I really like the ending:<br />"Yet those who stood in warmth of grace<br />Will find they’ve grown new leaves and roots<br />And not lament the night’s demise<br />When tasting winter’s ripened fruits"<br />It truly reflects grace.juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217921788622880428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-41584763768588831622010-11-07T16:03:26.616-05:002010-11-07T16:03:26.616-05:00Enjoyed this poem. Especially enjoyed your use of ...Enjoyed this poem. Especially enjoyed your use of parentheses. Greatly underrated (and underused). Nice work<br /><br />Luke @ WordSaladAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-64864663544752501142010-11-06T23:09:48.977-04:002010-11-06T23:09:48.977-04:00This is one of those poems that you have to read a...This is one of those poems that you have to read a few times to peel back all the layers. It's definitely worth savoring.<br /><br />As the clocks turn back tonight, and the days grow short, this poem reminds that it's worth the wait for "spring that comes forevermore).TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-36700431277935242702010-11-06T10:42:22.535-04:002010-11-06T10:42:22.535-04:00sunfall,
wow,
what a novel term,
your poem is as c...sunfall,<br />wow,<br />what a novel term,<br />your poem is as crispy as rising sun,<br />beautiful work,<br />keep it up.<br />Happy Saturday.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.com