tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post4268658444705684424..comments2023-08-28T03:14:50.812-04:00Comments on Bright Light - Dark Words: The Young AstronomerUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-19055604347730965072011-01-10T12:57:10.952-05:002011-01-10T12:57:10.952-05:00Lovely and refreshing! Loved it!Lovely and refreshing! Loved it!Sherryhttp://poetrybysherry.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-33829213451795994772010-12-31T13:52:51.274-05:002010-12-31T13:52:51.274-05:00how are you?
best wishes for you in 2011.
come to...how are you?<br /><br />best wishes for you in 2011.<br />come to poets rally if you wish.<br />Thanks for the support of 2010.Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-10081040313106610912010-12-31T06:20:25.482-05:002010-12-31T06:20:25.482-05:00Wow..I like stories written in a poetic manner!! B...Wow..I like stories written in a poetic manner!! Beautiful :)Aletheahttp://www.asmiworld.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-15680867966317074982010-12-28T16:38:31.576-05:002010-12-28T16:38:31.576-05:00That is inspired. Just lovely! :O)That is inspired. Just lovely! :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-29610609885794238732010-12-28T02:45:50.159-05:002010-12-28T02:45:50.159-05:00I love story-poems, Feydor, and this is particular...I love story-poems, Feydor, and this is particularly well done. You worked hard on it. That's apparent. Thank you for a very fine read.<br /><br />Best wishes for new year and enjoy potluck.JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-85366547807871459312010-12-28T00:03:04.285-05:002010-12-28T00:03:04.285-05:00beautifully done!beautifully done!Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-81597522926248790242010-12-27T16:59:16.392-05:002010-12-27T16:59:16.392-05:00Cleverly told tale of yore... new twist, glory don...Cleverly told tale of yore... new twist, glory done. Excellent write.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-30038465204791487622010-12-27T11:00:33.147-05:002010-12-27T11:00:33.147-05:00Excellent poem! It brought new life to an old stor...Excellent poem! It brought new life to an old story. Very well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17039433088952481073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-16073662535946037402010-12-27T03:45:40.589-05:002010-12-27T03:45:40.589-05:00very cleverly written, I love the idea of 2 kings ...very cleverly written, I love the idea of 2 kings and a boy arriving and 3 wise men leaving. This is really really good!<br /><br /><br />http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/27/stocking-filler/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-29728124818060958832010-12-27T00:42:33.127-05:002010-12-27T00:42:33.127-05:00Amen! mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/20...Amen! mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/12/06/time-is-not-the-essence/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-48894699077328016782010-12-26T21:59:25.040-05:002010-12-26T21:59:25.040-05:00And if they entered in that day
Two magi and a boy...And if they entered in that day<br />Two magi and a boy<br />They left that place on homeward paths<br />Three wise men full of joy...<br /><br />perfect rhymes, your entry is full of humor, wit, and joy..<br /><br />Thanks for coming in, have fun!<br />Happy Holidays.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-80706575819079122482010-12-26T21:54:49.095-05:002010-12-26T21:54:49.095-05:00I enjoyed this, Fyodor. Well-written take on the s...I enjoyed this, Fyodor. Well-written take on the story of the three magi. The rhyme and meter flowed nicely.<br /><br />My potluck: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/27/celebrate-today/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-15971061461525273262010-12-26T21:30:06.127-05:002010-12-26T21:30:06.127-05:00Nice story, love it!=P Have a wonderful new year a...Nice story, love it!=P Have a wonderful new year ahead :PRiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-38108052537823529752010-12-25T21:44:20.479-05:002010-12-25T21:44:20.479-05:00What a wonderful poem for this season! I love th...What a wonderful poem for this season! I love the way you told the story!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1759927492081931630.post-85394284366376630832010-12-25T15:17:47.075-05:002010-12-25T15:17:47.075-05:00Retelling of an old story from a different point o...Retelling of an old story from a different point of view. Have a fine Holiday,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://intuitivepaths.wordpress.com/2010/12/25/come-celebrate/noreply@blogger.com