Tuesday, September 27, 2011

She Walked Between

Who walked between my winters
And left a warm impression there
Who walked between these islands
Reminding me of bridges fair

Who scaled the walls so frozen
Who added life to all the bare
And plain facades I'd chosen
To mask me from a luring stare
Of eyes that keep their secrets
While calling one to care

Who left before the winter
Could freeze her anywhere.
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6 comments:

  1. The Cello StringsSeptember 28, 2011 at 3:27 p.m.

    very lovely imagery.

    keep their secrets while calling one to care, wow.

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  2. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton September 28, 2011 at 3:37 p.m.

    a perfect piece,
    poetic and thought provoking.

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  3. Marbles in My PocketSeptember 28, 2011 at 6:57 p.m.

    Beautiful! Wonderful writing. Love it!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/one-she-beckons-me-come-2/

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  4. Classic NYerOctober 5, 2011 at 4:31 a.m.

    She sounds beautiful. I love how this is put together.

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  5. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryOctober 5, 2011 at 10:10 a.m.

    very enjoyable.

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  6. Ann LeFloreOctober 5, 2011 at 12:39 p.m.

    strong ending who left before winter could freeze her anywhere
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/

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