Tuesday, September 27, 2011

She Walked Between

Who walked between my winters
And left a warm impression there
Who walked between these islands
Reminding me of bridges fair

Who scaled the walls so frozen
Who added life to all the bare
And plain facades I'd chosen
To mask me from a luring stare
Of eyes that keep their secrets
While calling one to care

Who left before the winter
Could freeze her anywhere.

6 comments:

  1. very lovely imagery.

    keep their secrets while calling one to care, wow.

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  2. a perfect piece,
    poetic and thought provoking.

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  3. Beautiful! Wonderful writing. Love it!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/one-she-beckons-me-come-2/

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  4. She sounds beautiful. I love how this is put together.

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  5. strong ending who left before winter could freeze her anywhere
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/

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