I begin to see the raindrops
In the distance.
I can’t hear the pitter-patter
Or feel the soaking dripping cold
Of the remote pouring.
I’m in the warm sunlight
Watching rain across the waters.
This strait—
Seeming a gulf—
Between
Places;
Here and there
People;
I and you
Cultures;
Us and them
Rends
Perceptions from reality
Scattering the truth like raindrops
A very nice piece of writing, Fyodor.
ReplyDeleteVery pretty, I love the flow! I love the last line, most" Perceptions from reality scattering the truth like raindrops in the distance"
ReplyDeleteGreat Job~
//Perceptions from reality
ReplyDeleteScattering the truth like raindrops
// I loved these lines... very deep and thoughful write
Thanks for joining Poet's Unite. Fine work!
ReplyDeletelovely imagery,
ReplyDeletewell done.
Happy Sunday!
There's something about a body of water that just takes you out of yourself...
ReplyDeleteGreat write! loved the last bit ' perceptions from reality scattering the truth like raindrops'
ReplyDeleteyour words flowed through me
thank you
This was lovely, very tranquil and soothing.
ReplyDeleteI just checked with Poets United and we're in the same group. It's nice to meet you and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Thank you everyone for your comments. I read each one of them and I appreciate them all.
ReplyDeleteI don't only write for myself, I write for all of you.
loved the last line. :)
ReplyDeleteOh.. this was some excellent imagery, Fyodor... and a thought very well organised in words too!
ReplyDeleteAll these cultures and diversities scattered like raindrops -- a neat analogy!! Me likes!!
Lovely.
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